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Posted at Mar 23/2006 09:22PM:
chris witmore: Hi Joseph. This is really coming along well.

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Posted at Mar 26/2006 11:22AM:
[chris witmore]: Excellent use of imagery. Very clear and clever integration of imagery and navigation. Addresses issues from lecture: life-cycle, performance, memory, etc. Lays out the structure clearly in introduction. Life-cycle section contains a thoughtful discussion of the process through from raw materials to design to consumption. Also address issues of performance and memory and experience. Citation is unclear in sections--where are the links to the sources for the history and so on? The attention to the script, the addition of the scholia, the poster, CD, etc demonstrate an appreciation for the materials culture of RENT. Excellent work.